Helping Writers Take Flight
Sonia Jolliffe
Teacher Inquiry Project
TE 848
Michigan State University
Second Flight: Sestinas and student-led conferencing
Take off
Students used the initial stanza that they completed for homework in order to fill out a sestina template by inserting the correct words A-F at the end of each line.
Students then spent the period crafting the story of their image in the form of a sestina, creating lines that fit the words assigned to the end of each line.
Student-led conferences
To prepare for conferences, students were asked to complete a brief questionnaire that asked them to list the reason they selected their original image and associated words, the effect that they hoped their sestina would have on the reader, and the role that
the envoi played in their sestina. They were also asked to highlight their self-
identified strongest and weakest areas in the poem.
I met with students individually and had them lead the conference, taking me
through the responses on their questionnaire and then tackling the "weak"
lines. Because students had already identified their own intended effect
and "problem areas," I was able to structure my feedback to meet their
individual needs and help improve their poems without inhibiting their
individual voices or imposing my own style on their work.